To leave

by master of shadow   Nov 5, 2005


I want to leave,
To suffer no more,
No longer do I want to live,
I need to reach that distant shore,
Why won't you just let me die?
I am of no use to anyone,
But still you would trap me here,
Force me to struggle on,
Please this time just let me die,
I don't want to live, can't you see?
Let me go this time,
Allow me to be free.

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  • 18 years ago

    by †Undone♥

    Oh My God, this was so good! The flow was perfect!

    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Allison

    I reallly enjoyed reading this poem. To me it said a lot even though it wasn't that long. Keep up the good work. *5/5*

  • 18 years ago

    by SuperJenius

    I liked it ; ive been locked up literally after attempting suicide. not fun .
    even though it doesnt describe my experience its still great. awesome
    ~HazE

  • 18 years ago

    by M MEM

    Eh, a little trivial, could have some stronger emotion, but its good as it is

  • 18 years ago

    by cowgirlstar26

    This isn;t a bad poem , I liked it atleast
    I dunno it was ranked that low but I'll boost it up a bit, thx for r/c on my poem

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