Six words

by Emily parsons   Nov 7, 2005


The six words you screamed at me
Sliced through like a knife
It had met my expectations all too well
Yet an ounce of relief , i did not feel

I tried to focus on somthing else
Stare down at my shoes
But nothing can hide the fact i felt sore
Now you wernt even sorry , i hated you more

Id waited for months for us
I gave up my life
Yet somehow i knew it would come crashing down
You looked in my eyes and said "see ya around"

My tears fell down hard
But my face still expressionless
Never again can i fight for this love
Youve left me too broken , now ive had enough

I watched you fade
Out of my life
But the six words you said , theyve left me sore
Wont ever forget that you said \"i dont love you no more\"

*The rainbow isnt always as beautiful as it looks. The rainbow can break you*

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  • 18 years ago

    by amelia

    This is lovely one indeed... i love sad poems cuz im sad all the time
    i can feel ur pain in this
    5/5
    love
    amy

  • 18 years ago

    by bex

    The last part is so shattering, makes you realise that even the people you love with all your being can hurt you as much if not more than everyone else

    -hug-

  • 18 years ago

    by Kirsty

    I wont ever let her hurt you again like that
    I promise you even if i have to give up everything to keep you safe i will
    I love you more than ever and there is no way she is getting in your head again
    You forget I killed the rainbow hehe
    love you sunshine xxxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by -Beauty-

    That poem was so short..but yet sooo deep...ways 2 go on it!!Loved it

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