THE LIGHT IN YOUR EYES
by myshiningstar14 Nov 7, 2005
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THE LIGHT IN YOUR EYES WHEN I SEE YOU, THE WAY YOU LOOK AT ME, THE REASON I KNOW MYSELF IS ALL BECAUSE YOU MAKE ME SMILE. THE NOTION I FEEL WHEN I AM IN YOUR PRESENCE, MAKES ME FEEL AS IF I'M ALREADY IN HEAVEN. THE SENSITIVITY OF YOUR APPLIED EVERYTHING, DEFINES THE DEEPEST PART OF ME. I SIMPLY MELT, WHEN I AM IN YOUR PRESENCE, YOU'RE THE BEST THING I'VE EVER KNOWN, AND NO ONE CAN COMPARE TO THEE. |
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18 years ago
Wow....interesting...I like this one very much....the words in which are said are just breathtaking...
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18 years ago
by Cuddles
I disagree, Lissa. This is very good. Don't doubt yourself. This is the way I feel about someone else who uses this site. He's awesome and so is this poem!!!!!
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18 years ago
This simply put is how john makes me feel
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18 years ago
When i write poems grammer isnt apart of it...thanxs though LISSA
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18 years ago
by Falling Up
Its pretty good and heartfelt , also true.. the only thing id have to say is alot of grammar errors.. but above all its great! keep it up and thanks for commenting on mine!
