by Leah Nov 8, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
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The relentless beat of my heart |
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Thanks for your comment! Your poems are great! feel free to e-mail me anytime at ScottsAngelprincess2006@hotmail.com Take care and keep writing! |
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Jaw dropping!! Keep it up... u should publish your poems |
by Ariana
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Very nice, I liked how you repeated the 'dove' idea without making it sound repetitive. Also kuddos for having a long poem that managed to keep my attention :) |
by abby
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Nice |
by Juls
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WOW!!!LOVE IT!!!full of emotions, the first stanza really pulled me into it. love it hun |