Could never

by Wintersolstice   Nov 9, 2005


I could never hate you
Even if youl'd killed
Even though its hurting
and so many tears have spilled

I heard someone say
we dont cry for those we hate
So it seems in sobbing
I have sealed my fate

Again christmas is coming
but the snow on christmas day-
only freezes my empty chest,
Bringing cold and wet decay

I hate the way im lonley
and the hopeless hollow pain
I hate the dark nights
and then the day after...again

I could never hate you
Your the sun that melts the snow
But I will hate myself for loving
on the day you have to go.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Empty Space

    Brilliant!

    I absolutely adore the frustration and anger here. The way you hate and love at the same time. It's a really complex emotion. I think you've captured the emotion really well here.
    Perfection!

  • 18 years ago

    by yaRis

    Wow great poem i really love this part:

    I hate the way im lonley
    and the hopeless hollow pain
    I hate the dark nights
    and then the day after...again

    keep writing great job....

  • 18 years ago

    by shadowlight

    Great poem, very strong.

  • 18 years ago

    by ☆Vintage Butterfly Star☆

    Really nice poem, your emotion is clear. I especially liked htis stanza;

    Again christmas is coming
    but the snow on christmas day-
    only freezes my empty chest,
    Bringing cold and wet decay

    It stood out the most and was very powerful.
    5/5

    xxx cici xxx

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