Ditched

by Lady Vengeance   Nov 10, 2005


Hi, how are you?
What is you're name?
Please remember
This is not a game

One minute you love me
The next I'm alone
My heart starts to sink
Like a heavy grey stone

Hold me tender
Love me dear
My heart won't be broken
I'm making that clear

If you try to break me
You'll end up in pain
I'll slice your heart first
And then make my claim

See you tomorrow?
You say "I think not"
My veins are torn open
As if I've been shot

You hurt me so bad
With one little word
You're too busy with movies
And I won't be heard

We are still together
So why do I cry?
The thing that hurt me
Was that one word, "goodbye"

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  • 18 years ago

    by Grotesque Angel

    Oh crap, what did I do that time????
    lol, sorry simply assumed.

    Matt

  • 18 years ago

    by Dreams

    Hey your first stanza really draws me in. Very different, makes me want to read more. The fourth stanza is great, it shows some attitude. lol. It's again like a twist, it becomes a sad poem. I thought it'd be the other party who'd get hurt. This is felt. Again, enjoyable. =)

  • 18 years ago

    by ShadowDancer

    Great job again!! it feels as if i have stolen your emotions when i read your stuff. its all out there in the open

    Ruby