Alone, We Suffer (Double Etheree)

by DBM   Nov 10, 2005


Just thought I'd try the Etheree thing out... Here goes nothing...

Alone, We Suffer.

Run
Vainly
Bleeding wounds
Tear stained faces
Death weighs heavily
Absolute pain reins free
There is no escaping this
Broken wings lie with shattered dreams
Eternal torture exhausts the soul
As distant fantasies fool the torn heart

Turn away from meaningless hope and fear
Nothing can pierce this total darkness
No comfort found in shadowed worlds
Suffer now, lost and alone
As guilt's cold fist clenches
Hate prospers quickly
And earthly love
Disappears
Into
Hell

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  • 16 years ago

    by kongie vangie

    A nice poetry.........

  • 18 years ago

    by Puerto_Rican_Chick

    I especially love this part of your poem

    "...Broken wings lie with shattered dreams
    Eternal torture exhausts the soul
    As distant fantasies fool the torn heart."

    its so deep! another great job!
    *5/5*

    LaterZ,
    BX Girl

  • 18 years ago

    by AlexJ

    Man... It was damn good. I liked this part especially: "Eternal torture exhausts the soul" So beautiful, yet so dark. Great job!

  • 18 years ago

    by VioletRaven

    I'm very impressed, I think it works really well.
    Great write, hope to read more of your work.
    *VioletRaven*

  • 18 years ago

    by ASPHYXIATED

    Hey, this is good... I find those types of poetry very hard so this looks like a master peice to me!
    I really enjoyed reading it, it felt so strong and powerful!
    Well done x)

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