A Heart Already Broken

by Fade_t0_bLaCk   Nov 11, 2005


One after the next
over and over again.
Guys keep giving me a reason
for my life to end.

One in particular
right now.
He hurt me so bad
now I have no way out.

No way out
of my inner self.
Where I hurt the most
where pain I felt.

Why do guys
insist on breaking my heart?
Take my life
and tear it apart.

Why do guys
want to use me like a tool?
And I fall for it
just like a fool.

Well now it will end
no guy will hurt me anymore.
My soul now lost
my heart already torn.

I know it sucks, but plz comment and tell me how I should improve.

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  • 18 years ago

    by hopeless08

    I really like this one.

  • 18 years ago

    by Valerie Rose

    This is a great poem. You do not need to make any improvements