by Becky Nov 12, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
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I take a tentative step |
by Amanda
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Aww becky this poem is amazing i love you n yes guys suck but u gotta love them sometimes |
by Megadrive
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That was awesome! I weally, weally, like it lol. Only thing... try using more commas and periods to give ur poem a beat and of course it tells the reader when a sentence has ended and a new one has begun. |
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Great job :) |
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It makes sence. |