Listen

by xX-jess-Xx   Nov 12, 2005


A quite little six year old,
she didn't cry, scream or yelp.
But quietly asked her cousin,
for some much needed help.

See, her cousin was a workaholic,
with extraordinary wealth.
"go and talk to your mum" he said,
"I can't, she shot herself".

"Well, go and ask your brother,
he'll know what to do!"
"But i can't do that either,
hes hanging from a noose."

"what about you dad?
Hes still on the rails?"
"No" she said whilst shaking her head,
"my daddy is in jail."

"I can't help right now,
I've got a lot of work to do.
Go and see your aunt,
she'll gladly comfort you."

She knew he didn't listen,
and that he never really cared,
about his little baby cousin,
who was confused an scared.

He gave her a pat on the head,
as she walked on through the door.
But as she stepped onto the pavement,
she was was knocked down to the floor.

And in that one last moment,
her life flashed before her eyes.
Of all those happy times,
the times before the died.

As her soul drifted up,
up to those pearly gates.
She thought about her cousin,
the one she didn't hate.

She loved him for what he gave;
no help, no advise, no lift.
because sending her to heaven,
was the greatest of all gifts.

**would really appreciate it if you could comment on this 1.**

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  • 18 years ago

    by Me&You (simply magical)

    OK THIS IS SOOOO AMAZING gurl you brang tears to my eyes and i'm thinking in my head "dont cry dont cry" i just hope this poem isn't based on a true story...........it was sooo brilliant.
    Keep it up!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    *thumbs up*
    luv jess xoxoxoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by Katlynn

    This one was really good. i really liked it and it's very sad. But it shows how the cousin wasn't good enough wasn't being a good relative like we all should be to our familys. You did an amazing job. Very talented. keep it up. keep on writing. love always and forever.

    ps thanks for the comments

  • Omfg. that is so effing good. omfg. omfg. i love it. keep writing. ill check out ur other stuff also. 5/5.

  • 18 years ago

    by Momentary Relapse

    Quite different. Quite different. The wording though nice for what it did could be a touch better to make this better yet it is good. Very unique since it was a very different poem. Excellent work.
    ~Faith

  • 18 years ago

    by Pure Silence

    Very sad, but well done maybe work on the style a bit to make it pop but wonderful!

    Pure

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