Just Watch

by Jamie   Nov 12, 2005


I can see it and I can feel it
But I can't force it
It can rip me apart and spit me out
And I can't fight it

Sometimes when it's heavy
All I can say is how could you
And how could I let you?
This isn't your fault this time

We know something's wrong
And we know what it is
Is it deeper then we are?
It's possible because I'm drowning

When the car starts to skid
You can't stop it, just watch
It could leave or dead or worse, not
Either way, you'll suffocate

You can't stop the wreck
You are the wreck
So just let the metal crush your skull
It'll be alright just let yourself go

Pain is natural although you're fake
But if you let it wrap itself around you
You won't have any place to run
So just let it take you and have you for itself

Everything is safe if you're not afraid
And fear is everywhere intensified
So might as well just fall back and watch
Because there isn't a thing you can do

Blood isn't your friend
Nobody is, because you killed them
You can wash the blood off your hands
But it still runs through your veins

Injected and submitted to denial
And all this time we all know
It's only to prey we don't let go
But either way this isn't real

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  • 18 years ago

    by Kayla

    Jamie, I want to say thanks for the comment on "Weak", And this one is... good, I don't think that its your best, but it shows more emotion then some of the others, When I read through poems, I try to see if I can feel the emotion and in this one I could... Great Job, Keep Writting...

    XOXO
    Kayla

  • 18 years ago

    by Darien

    The first few stanzas, I was like, what's "IT"
    haha. A good poem. This was a sad poem, and in a way, a dark one. I felt the pain, and the emotion. Good stuff.

  • 18 years ago

    by lindzy

    Good job m'dear, it had a good rhythem which makes it flow very well. Its also very passionate which is good.
    Linds

  • 18 years ago

    by Mona

    Good poem, nothing else I can say. Keep up the good work and take care -xxx- Lotsaaaa love!

  • 18 years ago

    by JAY Poet

    GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!