I stand alone

by lostlllsoul   Nov 13, 2005


I stand alone
This silent night
My pain and anguish
I try to hide

You left me here
So empty and cold
With shredded memories
Of my spirit and soul

Your ripped me naked
And tore out my heart
Your took away my innocence
And pulled it apart

My whole body
Filled with scars and marks
Each has a tale
Spinning into the dark

You punched me
Every time I tried to run
You assaulted me
In the name of fun

After playing your game
You quickly left the scene
Lying there filled with shame
Now forever I'm unclean

With only mud concealing my body
My whole body gravely hurt
I cowered to the the other side
And tried put on my torn shirt

A stinging pain shot through my abdomen
Every time I tried to stand
I tried to recalled what happened
But my thoughts merely ran

But the pain was just too great
Once more, I fell on the floor
I lay the lifeless and unconscious
My soul was felt so sore

You took away my life that day
Now my soul is cold and empty
My spirit is wandering elsewhere
Slowly waiting for eternity

*Thanks for reading this one. It means so much to me... Thanks

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  • 18 years ago

    by ~Fallen Angel~

    TYhis was a powerful poem I gave it a 5/5!!! I know how you feel and if you ever need to talk you can always come here. I think its great that you can write because you can let some of the hurt in the poem...Keep on writing and smiling =)

  • 18 years ago

    by Mezmeryz

    Ohh me god! wat a flipping sad poem:'(...i feel soooo sorry for you!! hey but you know ill always be there for you...to talk to..bout anything...keep strong..like you are..always..and thanks for your advice the other day!!
    xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Kayla

    I can tell how you felt when you wrote this...the details are great and the emotion is powerful...Thanks for the comments on my poems...

    XOXO
    Kayla

  • 18 years ago

    by Lucy Loves Not

    Well....I feel like I can relate to this poem because when I first started writing I wrote poems that were alike this one. I don't think it's a five; although, the meaning is important, the rhyming scheme and simple words kind of bring down the poem. I did enjoy it though.
    Christa

  • 18 years ago

    by master of shadow

    That is a great poem the expression and descriptions so clear you did a great job on it