YOU

by Brandon   Nov 13, 2005


You said you would never leave me,
You said no matter what
But where are you now
Your gone
Away from me for ever
So I settled down with another
Now 2000 miles apart stand that other
And he tells me hell never leave me no matter what
Well save it
I don't want it
All ready torn up inside
How could he mean it
Hear rumors about him
How could he love someone broken like me
You loved me
But then you died for me
You left me like you said you never would
Now I stand here on your birthday
Feeling alone and empty
Feeling torn apart
No matter how much I love the other
There is still a hole in my heart

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  • 18 years ago

    by JLT

    Wow, this is amazing! It's so sad. I know it's hard to lose someone.. Especially the way you lost him... I'm here if you ever need to talk to me, though.. And you're an amazing writer. Keep up the wonderful work. *hugs*

    ~Jessica

  • 18 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    Good one..i rly enjoyed it keep it up hun. LISSA

  • 18 years ago

    by Kirsty

    This is AWESOME!!!
    I love it every word flows straight through the next...so much passion and heart ache...WOW great write brandon Well done :D:D
    5/5
    Check out some of my new stuff too
    Take care ~Keep it up~
    Love kirsty xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Torn

    Wow hun i read ur profile and that's truly tragic, i'm so sorry for your loss.
    This is a sad poem hun..as intended..'
    i hope you're ok.
    sorry i couldn't give the wise words as u did on mine...
    thanks a lot for the comment xoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by DevilWithin

    Hey Brandon, I liked your poem just make like wat lisa said make it flow and have some kind of rythem. srr I'm not teacher I know just trying help, but otherwise I liked it alot--Rachel--

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