Vulnerable Beauty

by Princess09   Nov 14, 2005


Eyes so precious,
Hidden by a bruise.
Lips so perfect,
Chapped and used.

Perfect figure,
Lovely soul.
She is each and every
Guys ideal trophy or goal.

She is a beauty,
Hidden by a beast.
Of all the love she gives,
He gives back the least.

Skin so soft,
Fragile as can be.
Hey vulnerable beauty,
No one can see.

Beaten by a man,
Her ife was unfairly dealt.
She was the perfect spouse,
and hate is all she ever felt.

The beast soon did die,
And she was left all alone.
All the scars and bruises faded,
To show someone unknown.

She learned her worth
And finally saw her beauty.
She made herself strong,
So that every man could see.

No longer vulnerable,

This beauty would go far.
She would have a good man,
nice clothes, and the best car.

She reached out to others,
Made them understand,
She wasn't like the others,
She would lend a helping hand!

Never forgetting her beast,
This beauty grew old.
Now to teach a valuable lesson,
Her story is told.

Never take for granted,
What you have in life.
She was a beauty,
hidden once, as an abused wife

11/13/05

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  • 17 years ago

    by Sole

    Aweomse poetry, my favourite so far. I really enjoyed reading this, nice work.

    Peace. [Sole]

  • 18 years ago

    by Ariana

    Really nice piece 0f work here, it is quiet and original idea. I liked how you ended it optimistically with your main character rising above the situation. I'd recommend not ending with an exclamation mark because it makes it sound less serious at the end.

  • 18 years ago

    by Samantha

    The subject of your poem isn't widely written upon, or at least I don't read a lot of poetry about spousal abuse. I like the backbone of this poem.

    And thanks for the comments on my poetry. :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Brokeback

    Such a beautiful poem, really !

    xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by sarah

    Absolutely love this poem. you are such a simple writer and that makes your poems so understanding.
    take care