Comments : They Say I've Got It All

  • 18 years ago

    by Giorgii

    Touching poem hope its not true life is too precious to throw away but great poem part from dat

  • 18 years ago

    by dyingbrokenangel

    Awww hun u know i love u!! plz keep ur head uo high xox

  • 18 years ago

    by TeArS R FaLLiNg

    Hey cheer up hun, it does seem that people think you have it all, but you feel that you dont..i know what it means but i hope youre okay xxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by BeautifulDisaster

    Aw hun Omg, This is such a true poem about my life, the verse "They don't see her hidden scars,
    Her tear-stricken eyes.
    Her heart being ripped apart,
    By all the pain and the lies." it seriously took my breath away, it is so me right now and it's so beautiful, this is a fantastic poem my dear, well done, take care

  • 18 years ago

    by Jacklyn

    Aww great poem i sure hope everything is clearing up for you! things will get better just give it time. you have a whole web site of people to talk to if things get too our of hand and you need someone. i'm here for you.

    ~Jacklyn

  • 18 years ago

    by I.Dont.Own.Emotion.I.RENT.

    Omg anna i love this poem! i know this feeling exactly! its crazy i just had a conversation about how everytone thinks my life is so good 2day. but it rele sux...they just don't see the bad stuff- only the good. some people just don't understand huh? amazing poem! lyl~lex

  • 18 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Hi There!!

    Here comes another great work, you simply make me go out of words. In simple..lovely work and all the best...love

  • Hey hun, i hope y0o r ok! y0o r such a special person, dont let anyone tell y0o that y0our not! i no its hard and the pain is really strong but plz hang in ther, don't listen 2 the fuked up people hoo make y0o feel like shit, stay with the people hoo make y0o feel worth living, i no lifes hard and y0our going to feel pain, but y0o keep y0our head up high, y0o deserver all the happiness in the world, u r 1 of my favourite writers, i love the emotion and i can totally relate to this poem! ke ep shining huni!
    luv y0o lots n lots
    maddison **hugs**

  • 18 years ago

    by ALEXIS

    Hey... I'm really sorry that you felt like that i wish you'd talk to me, i know its hard but sometimes it has to be. i love you babe you should know that. I'm sorry if theres something i should have done, to help you in anyway! your poems are awesome and so are you keep up the top work, they are so real it feels like i've known you for ages... although we've never met Love you babe

  • 18 years ago

    by ...

    Aww hye baby dont wrry life gets rough often nd alot of the time u just wanna shoot urslef through the head but just hold on, it'll b better soon
    reminds me of one of my fav quotes
    even after the darkest night, the sun will rise
    i think thats it, feel better soon
    xox

  • 18 years ago

    by littleshadowgirl

    That was kick ass

  • 18 years ago

    by AMANDA

    Im feelin ya poem......thats excactly how i feel...keep up tha good work....u can really get some wheres wit em

  • I like it. 5/5. i can also relate

  • 18 years ago

    by Chelsi

    Very touching and full of feeling!! Hang in there!! Great job!! Keep writing! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Symera

    Great poem... tho i'm sure everyones telling you that by now lol. I feel the same way i don't think ne one expects me to be depressed b/c i spend most of my day pretending to be happy so when i am finally to the point where i can't pretend everyone is so shocked. If only they knew right?

  • 18 years ago

    by Once an Angel

    Funny how blind the world always seems to be. They never see the pain others go through because they are rapped up in themselves so much. (not meant to be rude, just an obervation.) So yeah, you poem says a lot to me. 5/5!

  • 18 years ago

    by VYXSIN

    Touching poem

    i have bad days like that all the time
    luvin ya work keep it up

  • 18 years ago

    by Emma

    Realy good i feel like this alot of the time

  • 18 years ago

    by Razorblade

    I like it a lot, but the last stanze confuzzled me.. Keep it strong.

    -Taylor

  • 18 years ago

    by Avellana

    She can't bring herself to breathe.

    Theres something in the rythym of that line. once again. awesome job.

    Lv A, x