Oh..

by Lestat   Nov 14, 2005


Oh..
Was the word that you said when you saw my cuts..
Oh..
Was the word you used when you thought i was nuts
Oh..
Was the word you said when you found me lying on the floor
Oh..
Was the word i gasped
When you said you didnt love me anymore..

{ Odd poem.. I found it scrawled in my notebook that i .. well found.. i must of written it when i was about 12.. Hope you like it .lestat.}

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  • 18 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    I rly dso liek this poem..it sasy soo mucch abotu this cruel world....

    Lissa

  • 18 years ago

    by Gary Jurechka

    This is a great piece-very well written and conveys emotion so well, it is short and simple yet direct and edgy.It can probably be revised /re-written a bit to make it stronger.The ending is great-very powerful.

  • 18 years ago

    by Stephy

    I like it...it sounds like what alot of people i know would say...-xxx-

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