Captured by a Memory

by Princess09   Nov 14, 2005


Back in the 8th grade,
When things seemed so great,
Friends in every direction,
There was nothing to hate!

Now looking back,
It seems like it was all lies.
My happiness was decietfull,
From the hugs, to the look in their eyes!

We were picture perfect!
Our class of so called friends.
I trusted them all,
and thought our friendship would last until the end.

Caught in a thought,
Captured by a memory!
These days were my best,
And ruined for everyone to see.

We had problems,
But what can I say?
No one is perfect,
Nor is any day!

But we always stayed close
Or so I thought.
All their acts and plays,
I actually bought!

I was in love,
With a boy who stole my heart.
He beat it and used it,
And gave it back in two parts.

Never will I be the same,
As I was back then!
And if I had the chance,
I'm not sure if I'd do it again!

Even my best had me fooled,
Not until this day did I see,
That it was all a game to them,
And now I'm captured by a memory!

11/13/05- To everyoen at MV!!

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  • 18 years ago

    by pseudo

    Beautifully written poem.. i remember when i was in grade eight well i am in grade 8 lol... yea i loved how you spoke of your own experiences that is aways great and how you spoke how you felt also awesome! =) and also very unique title you chose for your poem.. we all get caught up in memories that we can see thru to reality once again great write keep it up =)

    --emotionless19*

  • 18 years ago

    by t i f f a n y ♥

    Wow.. This is really sad. I am assuming that there is an upseting story to go along with this poem. I hope things are better now.

    Tiffany.xox.

  • 18 years ago

    by avery

    I love this poem.
    I'm in 8th grade right now,
    and I can totally relate!
    You're a great poet.
    The flow of those poem was really good.
    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Richard

    Wow i can so realte to this everyhting changed when u go from 8 to 9 really 5/5 my new fav

  • 18 years ago

    by Larry

    I did a poem using the same title -- try not using conjunctions and feel free to critique my work

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