Sonnet: Down my arm

by And smiles hide everything   Nov 14, 2005


In this depressing world

Never ending pain

And

Deep unhealing wounds

Tears

Are Falling

Down my face

I'm Dead

Inside

Red Blood

Dripping

*-Down my arm-*

Dripping

Red Blood

Inside

I'm Dead

Down my face

Are Falling

Tears

Deep unhealing wounds

And

Never ending pain

In this depressing world

***I wanted to try different kind of poetry. The poem is the same thing frontwards and back wards. I know not my best but please vote and comment anyway.***

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  • 18 years ago

    by Tears of My Heart

    I really like your poem.. i can relate to it...it's awesome how it reads the same backwards

  • 18 years ago

    by Megan Michaud

    Good idea hun! It's great that you decided to try something new! love ya! oxox~Meg

  • 18 years ago

    by Rolo

    You're right, it was different. And because this is such a common subject to write about, it made it more interesting. Nicely done, and you expressed your emotions very well. Keep it up. You have talent. Thank you very much for your wonderful comment. I appreciate it.

    ~rolo

  • 18 years ago

    by Stephy

    Wow thats so great,lol, i had never seen, well read, a poem like that, anyway i like it!-xxx-

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