Hope and Faith

by Syn   Nov 15, 2005


I love God, its easy to see,
I asked god today about us.
Hours deep in prayer waiting for him to answer me.
Finally, he said we would have to have trust,
I asked him what i was supposed to do.
He said , son, she is meant for you.
He said we would have problems but we would pull through.
From way up here its easy to see,
You both need to have hope and faith.
You two were simply meant to be.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Marjan

    Hey David,
    I loved the first line. It brought a smile on my face:)
    take care,
    marjan

  • 18 years ago

    by Vickie

    The poem is very nice yet is it also unclear in the beginning you say "us" yet in ht end you say "you two" so who exactly are you taking about you and someone or someone and someone else. The only thing I can think tis that you are still quoting God and if that is the case it should still be in "quotes"

    Much Luv-VICKIE-

  • 18 years ago

    by Lenny

    Thanks, i like your poem it has a subtle rhyme that seems like it doesnt need to be there but is worked in with a very crafted style.

  • 18 years ago

    by Syn

    Aww!... aww.. what...?

  • 18 years ago

    by Avrii Monrielle

    Aww!

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