You And Me

by punk_princess148   Nov 16, 2005


You hold me like no one else, an
Opportunity not to be missed,
Until you go back to her,
And say it's her you've missed,
Never have you pulled away but
Drowned into a kiss, to
Me I just want something, that
Everyone can enlist.

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  • 18 years ago

    by TinyDancer46

    Great poem, hun! I really enjoyed reading it. Fantastic job

  • 18 years ago

    by TinyDancer46

    Great poem, very well thought of. The only thing I recommend is editing
    "itâ??s her youâ??ve", just because it takes off some of the focus of this poem. (don't worry that happens alot, just click edit and hurry and change it) terrific job, 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Cristian Teo Regalado

    Good poem 5/5 you should check out some of my love poems

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