Comments : What Am I To You

  • 15 years ago

    by w!th0utyou

    W.O.W!! its how i totally feel or felt i should say but.. i loooved it nice job keep writen :)

  • 15 years ago

    by RedRose

    Nicley done. touching the heart here. nice job

  • 15 years ago

    by MissSideways

    Beautiful. sad though. ive been through that before. i broke up with him and he came crawling back. tell him how it's going to be, dont let him pull u down. ur very talented, God bless!
    luv dani xoxo

  • 15 years ago

    by Angie

    Wow...just wow. That's an amazing poem!....It flowed really well and it was nicely writtin!...Sad though..heart touching! i luved the lines:
    "I can't stand this anymore
    You're driving me insane
    How can i show happiness
    When all i feel is pain"
    It was very well put! luvz it! ne wayz keep up the awesome work, ur very talented! =D

  • 15 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    I love this poe,m, its really good. I liked the way it was written and it flowed very well. keep it up and please return favour

  • 15 years ago

    by Void

    Wow, another excellent one. I liked this one more so than the other, simply because it is one that asks a question, that I'm sure alot of people have asked before. The emotion you included and how harsh it can be to not understand exactly what you mean to someone was one thing that just kept me reading and attached. I really like your work, and will be sure to check up again in the new future. I hope to see plenty more from you. Keep up the great work.

  • 15 years ago

    by Brigitte

    I really liked this poem! The title got my eye cause thats sort of what i'm feeling like at the moment. It really put how i felt into perfect wording and was really a glimpse of your soul! I loved it! Great work!

  • 15 years ago

    by Megadrive

    Very nice, lots of emotion! I would say some of the rhymes where a bit simple... As in *me, see, be, you, do, to* everyone uses them, because their easy rhymes (Dont get me wrong u can use them, its just everyone does, to often* It kinda takes away the true power of the poem, I think you can really explore words to get the meaning of a poem down better, the meaning, and the way its written is very well though! I really enjoyed it! Great job =D

  • 15 years ago

    by Alex Marlatt

    Wow that right there was sadified you're pretty good at this

  • 15 years ago

    by amelia

    Hi i find this poem really good...
    brings out ur thoughts so well.
    u got 5/5 : )
    thanks for rading my poem...
    pls vote & comment on murder or suicide
    i'll be only glad to return the favour like i did just now
    keep writing more poems !

  • 15 years ago

    by nightschild

    Anoter great poem,
    you have skill!
    i can realy get the emotion from this piece.
    xoxoxox mary

  • 15 years ago

    by Ike Dizzle

    Man... drama lol. I love it. The imagery and it flows real well. 5/5. Thanks for the comments.

  • 15 years ago

    by Danielle

    I loved it! This was a great poem! Thanks for the comment!!! 5/5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by The Wingless

    I honestly dont know what to say. This was an amazing poem. I have no idea how you do it. Wonderful. The format is alright.

    The flow is a little off.

    But the detail and the imagery is awesome.

    Great choice of words.

    And an interesting topic.

    keep up the good work.

  • 15 years ago

    by holly

    Wow this is a fantastic poem it was so. . .real and heartfelt. i really enjoyed this well done 5/5 xxALLYxx

  • 15 years ago

    by eliza austria

    Such a good poem keep it up.take care.

  • 14 years ago

    by Raven

    I love it!!! Its amazing how its exactly what I'm going through right now...

    He's really pissing me off.. Your poem just made me stronger. Thank you!

  • 13 years ago

    by lilia

    This is a wonderful and amazing poem. keep up the great work...loved the last stanza!!!!thanks so much for commenting..ill ocme back and read moree