Wow...just wow. That's an amazing poem!....It flowed really well and it was nicely writtin!...Sad though..heart touching! i luved the lines:
"I can't stand this anymore
You're driving me insane
How can i show happiness
When all i feel is pain"
It was very well put! luvz it! ne wayz keep up the awesome work, ur very talented! =D
15 years ago
by Tara Kay
I love this poe,m, its really good. I liked the way it was written and it flowed very well. keep it up and please return favour
Wow, another excellent one. I liked this one more so than the other, simply because it is one that asks a question, that I'm sure alot of people have asked before. The emotion you included and how harsh it can be to not understand exactly what you mean to someone was one thing that just kept me reading and attached. I really like your work, and will be sure to check up again in the new future. I hope to see plenty more from you. Keep up the great work.
I really liked this poem! The title got my eye cause thats sort of what i'm feeling like at the moment. It really put how i felt into perfect wording and was really a glimpse of your soul! I loved it! Great work!
Very nice, lots of emotion! I would say some of the rhymes where a bit simple... As in *me, see, be, you, do, to* everyone uses them, because their easy rhymes (Dont get me wrong u can use them, its just everyone does, to often* It kinda takes away the true power of the poem, I think you can really explore words to get the meaning of a poem down better, the meaning, and the way its written is very well though! I really enjoyed it! Great job =D
15 years ago
by Alex Marlatt
Wow that right there was sadified you're pretty good at this
Hi i find this poem really good...
brings out ur thoughts so well.
u got 5/5 : )
thanks for rading my poem...
pls vote & comment on murder or suicide
i'll be only glad to return the favour like i did just now
keep writing more poems !