Daddy1

by xX-jess-Xx   Nov 18, 2005


I fought forever,
just to achieve my goals.
But somewhere along the line,
I fell and lost my soul.

I gave it up, daddy,
cause no one seemed to care.
You didn't even help,
you weren't even there!

Daddy, I need you,
why don't you love me?
Is it cause I'm not good enough?
cause theres more that I can be!

I promise, daddy,
I'll do everything I can.
Just to make you love me,
why don't you understand?!

Oh my god, dad,
look at mummy's wrists!
She tried to kill herself,
cause you just don't exist.

Daddy, you didn't help,
not even to pay a bill.
You weren't even there,
when James was really ill.

Oh yeah, he had cancer dad,
you didn't even call.
Daddy, we almost lost him,
I hope you feel so small.

But guess what, now Ive realized,
that we don't need you dad.
I stopped thinking of you a while ago,
cause when I do it makes me mad.

**now this is a rubbish poem....cuz i find it really hard to write about my dad, so if you could give any advise, id be really grateful!**

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  • 17 years ago

    by Delie

    I think it's really good actually...i've never read any of your poems so i don't kno if you could do better, but if u call that rubbish...well i think it's GREAT!!! i really like that you tell your dad he was worthless, he didn't do anything...and now you've moved on...just like in a relationship!

  • 18 years ago

    by dancer

    That was great i can totally relate my dad walked out on my family too i think hes an arsshole

    and if you think this is rubbish im not sure wat u wuld call mine lol..........i really liked did it
    xo
    allana

  • 18 years ago

    by *Amber Faith.* ©

    I love this poem.
    Keep up the good work =]

  • 18 years ago

    by Katlynn

    Hun, write what is in your heart about your father. It's an amazing poem even though it's really sad knowing he wasn't there for you at all or for your family in fact. I don't know how that is at all but i know that it's prob. better without him then with him now. keep it up. keep on writing. love always and forever.

  • 18 years ago

    by Sharon

    I loved how you reffered to the father as Daddy..,it gave it a realistic vibe! That was amamzing!
    Sharon

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