by Shannon Graham Nov 19, 2005
category :
Friendship, family /
goodbye
What happened to us???? i really cant believe how much we have both changed so far this year. you've gone your way and I'm going my way...but despite the differences i thought we could still work out....i guess not. i remember all the years we've been together, all the memories we've shared. talking on the phone with you for hours on end about nothing at all, hanging out at my house, watching movies, going 4 walks, and just chilling w/ u period. u were really at my house all the time and i loved it. i loved having you there with me. i felt so comfortable around you...every little problem i had, all the drama in my life, everything, just went away when i was hanging out with u. i felt i could actually tell you anything....any thing at all and you wouldn't judge me, you wouldn't call me stupid, you would just listen. u listened to every problem i had and made me feel 100x better than i did. u actually cared about me. u know...sometimes just hearing your voice or seeing your name on caller id made me feel better, it was enough to know you were there. i loved spending time with you. even when we fought it was fine because i knew we would b fine again the next day. and we always were. but now things are different. nothing is how it was before. you've changed....Ive changed. we never talk...you never say hi...you never call...you never seem to care...you never listen...we just aren't the same BEST BUDS that we used to be. maybe it just wasn't meant to be, but i still have hope. i miss the friend that i could call anytime and you'd want to talk to me...i miss the friend that said they loved me any chance they got...i miss the friend that told me ABSOLUTELY everything and kept no secrets from me...i miss the friend that i could trust with all my heart...i miss YOU |
by Cody Morris
Good poem, i like it, it reminds me of my life. Me leaving away from my best friend and we where exactly how you explained in your poem. little advice tho your poem is very long and you start to lose the point of the poem. shorten it up and it would be great, i gave it 4/5. check my poems out and comment k thanks. |