by cowgirlstar26 Nov 20, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
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SHORT SWEET BEAUTIFUL GREAT JOB 5/5 |
by Vegetable
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Beautiful poem! All the rhymes were natural, and worked well to enhace the flow. 5/5 |
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Great poem. slight typo in line 6 but nothing major |