Life

by master of shadow   Nov 20, 2005


Life is like a river,
it twists and turns,
its course cannot be determined,
nor can it be controlled,
many routes that it may take,
but all end up the same,
all reach the ocean,
a chasm in this world,
made deep by the tears of misery,
and wide by the suffering and pain,
this is were we are all destined,
it is were we all will be,
what happens before matters not,
for we all end up this way.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Little Dot

    This poem is very true, all people end up in the same place and what happened before then doesn't matter.

  • 18 years ago

    by avery

    I love it how you give life a whole new meaning than what you would find in the dictionary. You can tell this has a lot of emotion in it.
    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by InMyWorld

    Haha this one gave me chills...no doubt from the truth in it. awesome writing style and the topic kept me thinking about it.

    5/5
    -sara

  • 18 years ago

    by Mistress

    Wow! I really liked this one! *thumbs up*

  • 18 years ago

    by XxTeArSxX17

    Nice job i love the opening to it, and you have a nice way with word keep up the good work

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