Used

by The Flame Within   Nov 23, 2005


Her face stings my mind
her name stains my lips
my heart lays on the floor hurt
"i promise i wont hurt you"
and i began to fall
as soon as i looked in her piercing eyes
i believed her
and i suffered for it
she leaved me all alone
she ditched me for other boys
but still my stubborn self
i believe her whatever she said it
"i Love you"
a victim of her simple crime
but now I'm aware now i know
i was simply used

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  • 18 years ago

    by Cait

    Hey I know how your feeling! you did great! I miss talking to you! comment me on one of my poems sometime!

  • 18 years ago

    by Just Sierra

    Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!

    For some reason, this poem made me hideously guilty!!!

    dalkfd;kajjdalja

    Love you though? lol....geese, this poem makes me feel like a horrible person & it may not even be about me...

  • 18 years ago

    by sarahAnn

    Thats hot.....

  • 18 years ago

    by lee

    Hey, this was good. and I know what it's like to be used. but keep your head up, it happens everyday. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by ChevyCowgirl23

    "i promise i wont hurt you" thats what he said....look where i am now!

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