Your my hero daddy

by Ruthie   Nov 23, 2005


Daddy you're my hero

I wana be just like you

daddy when I grow old

will I be bald too?

daddy sing me a song

I love to sing with you

daddy when I'm grown up

will I sing just like you?

daddy I love you

I'm ur princess, ur girl

daddy u love me too

I love it when we twirl

daddy I'm so very scared

why did you go today

daddy the men in white coats

took you too far away

daddy I don't like this room

why do these things beep

daddy I'm not real sure wats going on

but I know u hurt down deep

daddy I don't kno wat to think

mummy cried today

the doctor said I must be brave

cause daddy could soon go away

daddy I'm so mad at you

how could you hurt us so

daddy I feel all alone

I don't want you to go

daddy you're alive

yet somehow you seem dead

daddy I'm so empty

my heart feels just like lead

daddy how you've changed

your smile, the way u talk

daddy now every time we hug

it makes me want to balk

daddy I know I promised

our hugs would never end

but daddy didn't u promise

that ur rules would never bend

daddy u said u'd never hit

unless I'd been naughty

and daddy wasn't it u who said

never to be haughty

but daddy... now you're everything

you told me not to be

daddy please tell me this

why can't you just see

daddy you were my hero

I once knew wat to do

daddy you were my idol

but now I'm just plain scared of you.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Chelsea

    So much emotion and it brought tears t my eyes. the words in it are so strong, with lots of meaning to them. Great job. If you get a chance, please comment on one of my poems
    5/5

    xx
    chelsea

  • 17 years ago

    by Im not broken anymore

    Omg!!! Girl this is sooo good i wanna cry... Keep it up that was amazing.. Im putting mine on soon

  • 17 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Awww wow hunni thats amazing, i do relate to it, thanks for the comment. this is soo good. the whole structure and it flows so well, omg! cant believe you wrote that! well done please keep writing xxxxxx keep in touch honey xxxxxxx

  • 17 years ago

    by christina marie

    Awwww.

    This.
    Is.
    Tear-jerking.

    I love it.!

    5/5

    LOVE
    Lolli.xx

  • 17 years ago

    by Mona

    Wow this is a very emotional poem. I can imagine writting this poem has hurt you the most.

    Beautifully writting, very touching and emotional.

    Very well done

    Lotsaaa love
    -xxx-