Luna

by Strange Angel   Nov 23, 2005


The solemn sphere descends in light,
And only shows her face at night,
To hide in beauty of the day,
Until all colour fades to grey,
Not till the sun departs the world,
Can this strange beauty be unfurled,
But in the darkness truth will find,
A way to creep into the mind,
Stealing thoughts of life and heat,
Casts a blanket, makes us sleep,
Watching, silent, far above,
Silent wings; the peace of dove,
Crying stars, those tears of light,
Chase away the fear of night,
And in this solemn, silent place,
Liquid music fills with grace,
And in the crystal, diamond sky,
Angels spread their wings and fly,
Always gazing to the east,
For in the morn her life must cease,
Waiting for the calm of night,
To once again repeat her flight.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Fig

    Oooh!!! i love poems about the moon and this one is just spectacular! the imagery and language!!! ooh my!
    xxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Navy Blue Heart

    Whoa! this is my favourite poem of yours so far! Seriously good. I really like the personification and the metaphors used, especially about the stars being 'tears of light'.

  • 17 years ago

    by ..eliSa*

    Absolutly amazing job. great style of writting. keep up the good work! smilee

  • 18 years ago

    by LuVlYlUfFlY

    G8 poem loved it keep it up 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Ashleigh Skye

    Wow this was beautiful.. Its really refreshing to read something with a different rhyme scheme. and the words you chose were perfect. Nice job.. thanx a bunch for your comments