Sour

by Strange Angel   Mar 29, 2007


Numb and alone in my world
So sheltered yet reckless it hurts
And I don’t think you even saw.

Totally lost in the swirling depth
Of the mind turned beautifully sour
And silence cries bloody murder to me.

I watch the rainfall through the window
And smile at the peculiar beauty
I wish that I could be washed away.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Flying Phoenix

    Madski my darling, you've written some poems!!! Wooo! I do think that this one is describing your mysterious tormented soul reaching out in a desperate plea of pity and self loathing.

    Or maybe it's just you being bored and writing poetry..... ;)

    Loving it whatever it may be about...

    LF
    XxX

  • 17 years ago

    by Black night

    Thought this was a great poem. short but sweat, and i also liked the kinda off beat rythm of it as well.
    5/5
    -Black night-

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