AWESOME POEM..
NOT SOMETHING TO HAPPENED TO YOU I HOPE..
I LIKE THE WAY YOU PORTRAAYED IT AS A FAIRYTALE..
WITH A SAD ENDING..
5/5

Great flow I love it

That was a good idea for a poem, I really liked it! Kind of sad though

WONDERFUL poem! A great story and beautiful choice of words! Keep up the good work and thanks a bunch for the support!

We omgsh that is such a cute poem! i can relate to it alot...its great youre so talented!! and thank you so much for the sweet comments on my poem...i really dont think im that good and knowing people like my writing is very important to me! thank you! Also knowing that someone as good as you thinks im good....that insane! lol ! but yes i love this poem as i love all of ur poems but i may not be able to comment all of them! ill try to comment as many as possible!

0h t0uching lines. beautifully written. great j0b! i realli liked it! keep em c0ming! =)

Girl this is so beautiful. I loved it. 5/5 from me. Thanks for your comments.

::MELI::

Wow loved the poem...i love the fairytale theme without the happy ever after...sad but good. keep it up!!

Wow. That was really sad, but I like how you did it. Our lives rarely end up being a "happy ever after" and it's a lot more realistic with a sad ending. I really like your stuff, it's amazing. Keep writing and take care. And thanks for commenting on mine. It means a lot.
> Kiesha

This peom is really good...ur really good at writing them keep it up :)

Wow that was great! i really like your style you wrote that in! i loved it!!
*check out my poems and tell me if they're any good!*
*liz

THERE ARE NO WORD TO DISCRIBE HOW GOOD OF A POEM THAT WAS!!!

WOWWIE!!!!
DEFINETLY 5/5

WAT TO GO!!

This poem is great, ur very talented keep up the good work n thanx 4 the comment. If u ever have sum time check sum other of my poems.
-HUGS N KISSES!

Omg!!! i love this poem!!! i love how you put Prince Charming and Snow White in there... its kind of sad... keep writing more please!!! 10/5 ;)

Hey there darlin! loved it *grins* I like ur style tiny... really do. thanks so much for the awesome comments u left 4 me. I only write about stuff if I've been through it! so.... *sniffs* I hope u don't do the same cause that was so sad!!! *hugs* c ya later!

This poem was so amazing. Its so good because it holds many different emotions. I love the way you made life like a fairytale except for the fact that life doesnt always end happy. Well great work. Luv Ya

Chantelle

Wow hat a great poem,the story in the poem is wonderful too though it's sad in the end
thatks for commenting on my poem it meant alot :)

Wow...i feel like that a lot and i always seem to forgive them...but i don't forget...i think u are a wonderful writer and u write from the heart...keep up the great work...i know u know this gurl...her name is Rican Chemistry...she has been thru a lot and i feel her pain and when i think about what she's been thru and i almost break down crying...i have been thru everything she has been thru...minus the babi...lolz...well excellent job with this poem...5/5

Your poems are great and so is this one....keep it up

This poem was sooo amazing.. it flowed awesomly and i loved reading it! it was original and it is a beautiful poem... i can't wait to read your next stuff!
xo adge