Thanks for your comment ;) I love your stuff, you're a really good writer! Keep it up!

Wow, this poem is really good. I felt like i could really relate to it. Keep up the awesome writing, you are very talented. :-)

Wow, this poem is great. It is wonderfully written and has a great story to tell.

Wow.that was soo adorable and so very sad. love it alot. if you get a chance please check out my poem, "breakdown" thanks bye

Wow thiz iz a great poem itz really diffrent n itz realistic yet not u did a gr8 job keep up tha gud work ur doin gr8!!!!5/5

Omg i love this poem i love this peom i love this peom its the best poem ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh the best i mean really ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh best best best best poem ever

I LOVE it is so different from all the rest nice job... is sad at the end but i guess it's more of a real poem since true love is hard to find... if u have a chance read my "princess dream" poem is short but ull like it...5/5 =)

Hey..I loved it....Great job..Keep up the great work...:) samantha

Hey, let me start off by saying good job. I don't usually read other peoples stuff so congrates on the interesting title. Now let me say good poem, first line had me worried but you picked up the rest. Now while this was a good poem it was so close to being great omg. It may just be me but the ending kinda ruined the rest of the poem for me. Don't get me wrong shock value is good, but complete 180 with no warning was kinda rough. Take this as you will, but keep 'em coming, I look forward to reading your work in the future.~Matthew

I've said it before and I'll say it again. You're a genius when it comes to poetry.

Nik-
that was awesome! You're so good at this! keep it up! thanx for your comments on my poems, they mean a lot! I love ya tonz! remember, "no man is worth your tears, and the only one who is will never make you cry." i try to live by this, but it's hard, but we can do it!!!! :P Much Luv~Me

I LOVE your poems...
they make me feel really good!
A-M-A-Z-I-N-G

5/5

~sara~

Wow... amazing as always... i love each and every one of your poems and this one is no exception... i someday hope i will be able to write as good as you...

sammie

WHY are all your poems sad!?!

This is such an awesome poem that tears are in my eyes. i love all your poems and this one is no different from all the others. it rocks. keep riting because u put in so much passion. oh and if its not to much to ask maybe u could check out my poem meek. i worked some time on that poem and i would like some feedback from somebody who is a good writer. thanks.

p.s. keep writing i love reading your wrok. awesome poem. nobodys poems are as good as yours

Thats how it works isnt it theres always gonna be some1 to take away everything you ever wanted :( its a great poem!!! i

Do you have ne bad poems ? lol

i dont think so!
ur awsome !

Wow

Amazing poem, the flow is perfect. it relates to 2 quotes i wrote about fairytales. it's great to know that other people understand my pain.
5/5
i loves ittt!

This is by far my favourite poem i have read on this site, i love it!
kelliexx