Troublesome Nightmare

by dollwithafrown   Nov 24, 2005


They just can't make it
The world's getting dark
People get scared
And dogs start to bark
Everyone's running
Trying to break free
Begging and crying
And starting to plea
But they don't understand
They don't really know
What's hidden behind corners
What makes evil show
So the first sign of trouble
They get up to flee
But they just don't understand
That they're running from me
See what I'm trying to say is
It's like I'm a curse
Wherever I go
I just make things worse
I'm a full living nightmare
I cause terror and pain
Whenever I'm around
The sunshine turns to rain
I try to make things better
I try to rearrange
But no matter what I do
I will never, ever change

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  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    Oh wow...
    I absolutely frikken love this!
    It's so beautifully written, the flow is flawless, the ending...wow.
    So hard hitting and powerful.
    I LOVE it!

  • 17 years ago

    by disturbed one

    You havent stopped amazing me yet...at first im like...its something like the movie "The Day After Tomorrow" how they r all running from a storm...but then it kicks in and im like wow was i ever wrong...

    Completely fantastic

    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Oscar

    This one was really good too, it flowed brilliantly and the rhyming was so close to perfection ( it's impossible to reach perfection, so close to is excellent )

    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    WOW.
    I absoluetly loved this!
    My favourite part was:

    I try to make things better
    I try to rearrange
    But no matter what I do
    I will never, ever change

    That really got to me.
    I think this is excellently written, and it is my favourite of yours.

  • 17 years ago

    by ŘÅÇĦ♥

    WOW!! Your a really good writer, I never seen your writing before but I'm gonna put you on my faves and look for some new stuff from you!!! It's.. I dunno amazing.. Like I said Keep writing!

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