If You're Looking for Perfect...

by Emma   Nov 24, 2005


Everyone says shes got it all,
Everyone says she's a perfect little doll.
They say she's got a perfect little life,
Well no one has seen her perfect little knife.

Everyone says she's got a perfect little face,
How she got her perfect little body is a tragic disgrace.
They say she's happy and never blue,
Am I sending the same picture to you?
Well no one sees her when she's home alone,
Slitting her flesh down to the bone.

Everyone says she has perfect little brains,
Well has anyone seen her imperfect little pains?
Her screaming parents and betraying friends,
How long she waits and waits while her heart mends.

So if you're looking for perfect look somewhere else,
Because she isn't at all, she doesn't come close.
Trust me when I say she's in pieces,
Yet no one knows.

**this poem explains itself...please vote and comment it would mean a lot!**

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  • 18 years ago

    by Just me

    Your an incredible writer and this poem is very moving

  • 18 years ago

    by Macy

    Terrific poem!!!!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Bertha

    ..i love that one of mine too..it just kinda came out and i SERIOUSLY just wrote it in like under 2 minutes! haha..just came out with a new one (maybe five min on this one! lol.)
    ch-ch-check it out and tell me what you think! LOL..

  • 18 years ago

    by Bertha

    I've already talked to you about this really great writtien poem and i know you would never even consider doing anything like that but it's beautifully written! we're awesome..hah

  • 18 years ago

    by Marjan

    Hey, that was very really good Emma.
    I liked this part :
    Trust me when I say she's in pieces,
    Yet no one knows.

    keep it up.
    much love,
    marjan