by Juls Nov 25, 2005
category :
Nature, environment /
nature
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Away from the city |
by charles
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Your work is fine although it began to get a bit choppy,other than that you have talent for sure |
by Solace
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I agree with you, so would I.. Very nicely written deserves nothing but a 5/5.. xx: |
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Julie, awsome poem. I loved it. I want to share a moment like that with a girl. Those kinds of moments in life seem to be the most in joyable, when you are loving someone and someone is loving you in return. Anyways good job, keep it up. |
by kkly
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Another good poem... |