Inside Outside

by Raychel   Nov 25, 2005


My eyes,
Are weakened,
My love,
Is broken,
I'm going to try to make things seem okay,
But my faith is wearing thin.

My heart
Is bleeding,
My soul,
Is barely there
I'm only smiling on the outside,
But I'm hurt beneath my skin.

I sit
and I wonder.
About it.
Asking myself why I caused so my pain to the inside?
Wondering why it didn't effect the outside.

Too much screaming.
Too many battles.
Too much drama.
Too little love.

It wasn't all me.
I guess now I do have someone else to blame.
You.
And them.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Fallen Angel

    Gd

  • 18 years ago

    by Tripp

    You have a strong style of writing, and are gifted at really making the reader feel how you felt...excellent job. keep up the good work

  • 18 years ago

    by beyond help

    Aww
    thats realy sad , but a great poem
    5/5
    keep it up

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  • 18 years ago

    by lonelynow

    I luv this! its so original!

    xxxxx

    p.s. thnx 4 the comment..i look like 200 lb

  • 18 years ago

    by Sorefromreality

    I love that poem and i kno how helpless u can feel.... awesome stuff girl, i am going to bc sound on sat. w/lisa and u can come too.....
    love ya lots,
    sore

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