Snow On My Head

by aDORKable x3   Nov 26, 2005


So cold as I step outside
No where to run, no where to hide
On I treck, to where, I don't know
Wondering, thinking as I go

Out in the snow, left to die
No longer weak, I no longer cry

My life was pure crazy
Yet, somehow your love saved me

Hopeful for a chance to show
Everything I think I know
Always trying, trying my best
Dead are the faliures, I lay them to rest

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  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I really like this.
    Even though it is so short, it is filled with depth and emotion behind the words.
    Flow is good throughout, and the ending is beautifully done, very intense.

  • 18 years ago

    by Audrey

    This is a beautiful poem. I really like how it flows. Hey and thanks for commenting on my poem. Sorry it took so long to get back to you. You can talk to me if u need me.

  • 18 years ago

    by TinyDancer46

    Omg! Such a beautiful and wellwritten poem. It was very sad though... if you ever need someone to talk to I'm always here, okay!?

  • 18 years ago

    by Gracie Jo

    Good poem. =] Thanks for the comment & vote. Take care.

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