Way out?

by ♥CRIMSONxX♥   Dec 3, 2005


Built up emotion bursting out from inside,
Killing me slowly, trying to hide.
Fake smile, starts to fade away,
Trying to make it through another day.

Slicing away at pale skin,
All the scars are blending in.
Another breath, quick and sharp,
Another dagger through my heart.

This empty life, dragging on,
Wanting the endless pain to be gone.
Full of hate and full of doubt,
Is this the only way out?

[Its rubbish, please comment & vote anyway. Thanks x]

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  • 19 years ago

    by Kirsty

    I dont think this is rubbish at all!!
    *shakes head* quite the opposite to be honest
    i think the flow of it is brilliant and your words are so well put everything all emotion nailed on the head!!
    well done sweetie!!
    i hope you write again soon
    so i can check them out :D
    love ya lotsssssssss
    kirsty xxxxxxxxxxxxx

  • 20 years ago

    by ASPHYXIATED

    Hey huni!!
    This is excellent! So sad tho why?
    Your flow was great like always babe, and I really enjoyed reading it.
    You know im always here to talk hun okay?

    Well done on this, full of emotion and xpressed your self very well, please stay strong, never turn to the knife KNOW you have people out there who care SO much babe xxxxxxxxxxxxxLisapiexxxxxxxxxxxxxx

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