Beautiful dream

by ryan   Dec 4, 2005


When I look in your eye's
you take me far away
to a place where you cannot fly
and only you and I could stay

we suddenly are finally there
you look so very enchanting
that all that I can do is stare
and hope you think I'm glancing

As I stare I become more and more amazed
at how very far all my dreams have gone away
so many words I wish could be erased
I am lost and only hope you can forgive

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  • 18 years ago

    by NightKeeper

    Wicked awsome!! i wish i knew a guy who had a dream about me like that! ur vera good!

  • 18 years ago

    by heather

    Fantastic job

  • 18 years ago

    by nadsyy

    Dis was sweet as...i lyked it heaps..keep it up. i gave it a 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Cheyanne

    Awww thiz poemz so sweet keep up tha gud work ur doin gr8!!!5/5