Comments : The Greatest Treasure

  • 18 years ago

    by Justin

    Great job keep up the good work

  • 18 years ago

    by Ann Stareyes

    Breathtaking....such a romantic poem. Beautiful.

    Love Ann

  • 18 years ago

    by Gesselle Valle

    Bill,
    Great poem! I just love it. It's a really sweet and deep too. My favorite part's:
    I long to feel your touch
    Our bodies coming together
    The sensations too much
    Wanting this forever
    I just think is really lovely. Great poem. Take care my friend.

  • 18 years ago

    by Karla Gordon

    Mmmmm I want some of that love.. very jealous here lol.. great writing :))

  • 18 years ago

    by Karla Gordon

    Anyone have a fan??? It's getting really hot in here.. lol :))

  • 18 years ago

    by nadsyy

    WOW dis was lyk perfect i reli luved reading this gav it a 5/5..keep it up...

  • 18 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    Nicely done Bill!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Tim Bradshaw

    Great poem kept me in it until the end loved gave it a 5/5

  • Wow thats beautiful....great job ur going in my favorites!!

  • 18 years ago

    by obsessedgurl

    Awwww so sweet, you are very talented