Passion: Omitted

by Amanda   Dec 9, 2005


James' hair is greasy as hell and he
smells like rotten bologna.
Yet for some strange reason
Carla loves him.

Linda's fat as a house and I swear
she eats children.
But every night
Blake sleeps with her.

Bobby's addicted to heroine and
he always beats Amy up.
But still, she goes
crawling back.

Julia shot someone last week and said
she'd kill Sam too, if he said a word.
He could easily break all her bones but
instead, he stays with a closed mouth.

All the disgusting romances.
All the heartbreaking lies.

Why can't a normal
girl like me
Find just a plain man
to look in her eyes
And say,

"I love you."

--This poem sucks a superlot. haha. --

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  • 18 years ago

    by obsessedgurl

    That poem does not suck! i so totally agree! Some people just let their s.o. get away with murder! glad i found someone who agrees with me... i do think it would be better if you made it rhyme...but if that's not your style that's cool.. well see ya round

  • 18 years ago

    by Solace

    I don't think it sucks. Brings up a good point in my mind. Defiantly an amazing write. 5/5 none to less. xx: blaine

    *> : PainOfOne

  • 18 years ago

    by CE

    --This poem sucks a superlot. haha. --

    You are so wrong with this one, This poem displays on the thoughts that everybody has like James' hair is greasy as hell and he
    smells like rotten bologna.
    Yet for some strange reason
    Carla loves him,

    Im sure everybody has thought at one point in their lifetime, Why is He with her or He doesn't deserve her, this was a good poem so I give it a 5/5 out of good job

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