Change

Outstanding job...well done, beyond words!

Nice i like this. powerful write.

Bill,

I thought you were in fact writing about my past, I felt such a strong connection with the words, having been there in that cold dark place. I am thankful that I am away from it and as you might say "reborn." This poem has hit home more then you can ever imagine my friend. Thank you for sharing.

regards,

Steve

Very impressive poem I really enjoyed reading it and it has a lot of meaning. I could relate to this poem so much I'm glad I got the chance to read it.
Keep up the wonderful work.=)