Amazing poem emma, i'm practically speechless, it is so sad that you're losing touch wth some people, but you still have me and katie and we love you xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

Great poem I rated it a 5 I would love it if when you get the time check out my poems and tell me what you think cause I think you're a good writer

I feel the same way great poem i loved it!!!

Well done Emma! lol i really enjoyed this one hun=) Diction and flow went really well in this poem and the subject mater was ace=) keep it up hunny!

Jenn

People lose touch n its really sad, but u hav to remember that if they lose touch, then theyre not worth ti anyway xxx

Hey huni, i really love this poem, but please please hang in ther, i no its hard but just keep writing, it helps get everything out, i really love ur work plz keep shining coz u r a special girl hoo can really make other people feel something wen u write! im always here 4 u huni

I really would post a longer comment, but I don't know what to say... you're amazing! Wow! What can I say, honestly? All of your poems are flawless! Amazing.

Omg, it's exellent! i loved it. thanks for commenting one of my poems=p

Wow i love the ending, "As the veil of black draws near." its sofinal and perfect for the song like it just finishes it off perfectly, i really love your writing sorry i haven't comment on too many poems i usually only have time to check my comments and such then im off, but you really are a great writer

im sorry to hear that your friendship is falling apart around you, this is a horrible thing i know how it is though, the one person that makes everything better has to go and then what do you have? its a horrible feeling, but you have me and everyone else on P&Q we are a family here as i like to call it and we all have your back

lots of love
*~*Becky*~*

Awe..so sad...but very beautiful. you are so talented.

This is also another AMAZING poem..
ive added you to my fav's..u're truly brilliant.
I just noticed this line..was it supposed to be soul?
"And piece together my sole."
im not sure..just wondering.

All the best to you hun, i hope you're ok -x.x.x-

Thanku everyone, ur comments mean so much to me xxxx

Amazing isn't an accurate enough word to describe this poem. It's so much sadness and pain in this poem. The words flew from the page and into my head so I'm pretty sure I'm going to be thinking about this poem for the rest of the day. All sad thoughts aside, this is a perfect write.

We love you Emma, please don't do it, I'm really running out of things to say you're so amazing, please keep writing!