Last December (a true event)

by amanda   Dec 16, 2005


Brother you been there for me since
i can remember
that's why it hurts when i mention
last December
you caught me in the bathroom
crying on my own
i said i felt alone
then let out a big moan
you grabbed my wrist and stared
couldn't believe what was there
you tried to stop the bleeding
but it just wasn't healing
you asked my how I'm feeling
that i looked kind of pale
i don't remember much only that i
fell
i woke up the next day to the
sound of the rain
i heared a voice say
she almost ravished the vein
i didn't realize where i was
but when i did i went insane
i screamed and screamed
for your name until you finally came
i asked if your ashamed
you said I'm not to blame
you just gave me a kiss and said
i love you little sis

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  • 16 years ago

    by CARRIE AKA CAREBEAR

    Aww that's so sad it making me cry im sry but it very sad

  • 17 years ago

    by Delie

    Ahhh, if everyone had an older brother like that...there'd be less suicidal people out there, maybe....GRETA JOB, love the rhyming

  • 17 years ago

    by JAY Poet

    Wow this is good!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Jackie Marie

    Wow..That is very good! I have just read all of your poems and I am now going through to vote on some! I have to say, you are a very good writer! 5/5