by Samantha          Dec 19, 2005
    
        category :
            Sadness, depression /
            other
            
    
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            The little girl is very scared  | 
by pseudo
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            Awesome poem.. it was touching and very sad... its weird to see what the world has come to thats just reality i guess.. anyways you poem was very well wrtieen and well thought out =) keep it up  | 
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 Great poem, yuo did a very good job on it  | 
by Tara Kay
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            Wow, what a great poem. well done, very powerful and emotional. Keep it up  | 
by Sherry Lynn
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            Wow that is powerful. The flow was a little off, but the message was loud and clear. You did a great job portraying the fear and reality of abuse.   |