Wow! That was amazing. So deep, I actually had to think about it. I heart poems like that! Beautifully written. Someone's on my favourites ;) lol. I have no complaints for this one. Excellent.

Awsome!

Thats really good as always, who's it about?

5/5

~Natalie~

I like your style especialy the pardox of the last part

Great poem , deep and meaningful and written very well

Dark and powerful :)

A great poem my friend!!

This is amazing. So powerful and such incredible pictures created. Out of all the things of yours I have read, this is my favorite. I can feel your heart and soul in this write. Stunningly rich and powerful.

Hey, great poem. it had a lot of meaning in it... plus it made me think. keep up the great work. thanks for the comments on my poems.
**lisa**

I think this was my fav poem of yours yet. Loved the last stanza made the whole poem excellent and brought ogether MUAH! keep up the excelletn work!

WOW, you've put all of yourself into this, very deep and powerful..... beautifully written.

Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela

Wowee absolutely awesome, everything flows, the rhythm is great, and your choice of words is excellent. Def 5/5

This is a great poem. I love the first two lines the best though; they stuck with me. 5/5.

Tiffany.xox.

Btw, you're on my favorites too. ;)

Hey Darien! I liked this poem alot. It was full of imagry so my tiny mind didn't have to try hard!! LOL I really liked the lines:

"Waltz your way down,
a dark and lonely road.
Find the buried treasure,
I once called hope."

It was an awesome poem man!

~Anthony

Very strong emotion and wonderful imagery.

Mmm, very powerful stuff, I thoroughly enjoyed every word... Beautiful rhyming scheme
Keep writing, and I love your style, very much unique ^.^

**AynJal**

Wow it made me think

Beautiful. Absolutely breath-taking. Definately, definately keep up the brilliant work!! ^^
-Reddo

I loved your poem.
its very creative in the sense that i saw no rhyme scheme.. but it kept my attention anyway.

~David

Sorry about not returning the favor, I usually only do it to ppl that you can tell didnt read your poetry. But I'm sorry for doing that to you, sometimes I don't have time to comment back and then when I come back I can't remember who I didn't send a comment back to. sorry, as for your poem, I had to read it twice but once I did I was amazed, This is a really good poem and I like the use of words, like "waltz" for some reason stood out, because not many people use that word but it went well. great job!