Should I or Shoudn't I

by Neil   Dec 20, 2005


What do I do, When all I do,
Is hurt the people I care for
Saying words and turning them blue,
Should I run and lock the door.

Leave them all and curl up crying,
Feeling bad, despair and dying
Asking myself,How could I be so stupid?"
Should I leave? Cause I know I could

Should I? or Shouldn't I?
Leave and change my name to Joe
What to choose, I don't know,
one by one, I loose an ally

feeling alone
not knowing what to do
wanting to die
but all I can do is cry...

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  • 18 years ago

    by Bre

    Nice poem ummm leave me a comment on my poem untitled by breanna

  • 18 years ago

    by BeautifulDisaster

    Ohh this is very unique and beautiful, I love your style of writing, you're going on my faves list hun hehe, thanks for all your comments, take care,xxoo

  • 18 years ago

    by ASPHYXIATED

    This dont suck =D
    Its emotional and shows mixed up feelings! well done!
    You added some rhyming to make it easy to read!

    welldone x

  • 18 years ago

    by Erica

    Oh wow. now that ones good...omg the one line "Leave and change my name to Joe" it made me laugh...but anyways im sorry you feel so sad. just know that you made a difference for me neil...read my new poem whenever u get the chance. its called Moon and Wind...cha cha cha, cherry

  • 18 years ago

    by Wings Of Flames

    Wow so much emotion and meaning in one poem is starting to rub off on to me
    lol
    that was great keep it up
    Loving it!
    Em