Last Will

by Ike Dizzle   Dec 21, 2005


(Verse 1)
If I killed myself tomorrow
I know you will not ask me why
Even if you did
All I would do is sigh
It always seemed like you did not care
Why do you not want me to die?
My life is a miserable and hideous wreck
Can you not see that all I do is cry?

(Chorus)
Looking at the pen and paper
Laying in my bed
Thinking my final thoughts
Before I am dead
And why do you not care?
My cries are so shrill
But you do not seem to get
That this is my last will

(Verse 2)
I get no respect
People do not know I exist
And you wonder
Why I am tortured by this abyss
This is your fault
Yes I am blaming you!
I feel anti-social
And it is all because of you

(Chorus)
Looking at the pen and paper
Laying in my bed
Thinking my final thoughts
Before I am dead
And why do you not care?
My cries are so shrill
But you do not seem to get
That this is my last will

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  • 15 years ago

    by Aussie

    Well detael:)

  • 17 years ago

    by Sorefromreality

    Good job i really liked this one...and btw, u ARE one of my favorites thank u very much! lol...so wut now dude? booyah! boo fricking yah!

    love ya lots,
    sore

  • 18 years ago

    by xXxDarkDreamerxXx

    Dude this was really, really an awesome song so far! This is just one of the best so far it blew me away!!!
    Do you play in a band or something?
    Hopefully one day it will become a song for everyone to hear! great work
    keep it up! ^_^

  • 18 years ago

    by Lenny

    Wow, that would make a killer song! And it makes an awesome lyrical poem to...which is what songs generally are. It has wonderful imagery and is just...beautiful, gripping, and an adventure in itself.

  • 18 years ago

    by A Former Outcast

    You did a very nice job working the rhyming and the way this song streams. It tells a very powerful message and i wouldn't be surprised to hear this on the radio all over someday. Keep up the good work!

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