Metallic Sedative

by Russell   Dec 25, 2005


To the metal I succumb
and the blood shows I'm alive
Can you see what I've become?
Without this can I survive?

At this point in life
My life has been lined in blood
Stained by this rusty knife
as I continue to drown in this emotional flood

I continue moving on
Carrying this heavy load
Though my soul is almost gone
I don't walk alone on this road

I'm accompanied by hope
With a slight touch of pain
and these pills wont help me cope
and for now here is where I shall remain

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  • 18 years ago

    by Puerto_Rican_Chick

    Wow... good poem! propz, hun.!!

    BX Girl

  • 18 years ago

    by t i f f a n y ♥

    Wow. Excellent poem. i can relate to it a lot! 5/5 forsure.

    Tiffany.xox.

  • 18 years ago

    by xDryTearsx

    This poem was really good very unique
    Good job. ♥
    -♥DryTears♥

  • 18 years ago

    by master of shadow

    Great poem. tis written very well, it flows well and the rhymes seem natural and unforced