Gone

by Gesselle Valle   Dec 26, 2005


Before, when I felt pain
I just got up and tried again.
But your words are tearing me apart
with cruelty they broke my heart.

Don't ever try to explain,
you have caused enough pain.
Please, just go on and pack,
before I decide to take you back.

My heart feels so much deception,
soon it will turn into depression.
I feel so empty, lonely and sad.
Why does it feels so bad?

With tears, I look into your eyes
as I say my last goodbye.
Now that you're gone, I wonder with fear,
who will be there, near...

To hold me tight
during the dark and cold nights
Who will be my friend?
But also my best friend...

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  • 18 years ago

    by I am begining to think it is not worth loving you

    I know how you feel and you hit every point right on the bulls eye keep it up

  • 18 years ago

    by Angie

    Such an emotional write, very heartfelt.

  • 18 years ago

    by Jay27

    Please, just go on and pack,
    before I decide to take you back.

    Love this part, and the whole poem.

    Well done...

    Ps. Having seen your picture...I disbelieve your claim to be 99. Were that the case you must have had colour footage before even the guys at Kodak knew much about it.

    I think someone is telling pork pies! :P

  • 18 years ago

    by dora

    0hh hun a t0uching piece. very heartfelt deep and em0ti0nal.

  • 18 years ago

    by Cassi

    Wow, what an excellent writer you are.

    Thanks for commenting on my poem, and I know how much it hurts for someone you loved so much, to hurts you bad...

    ~Cass

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