Let's heaven here
by Idiosyncratic Dec 28, 2005
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A brief explanation of this poem, since no one seems to understand it. I wrote this in the hope to cast some light onto what people really do. They come into new places, expecting the best for themselves, without thinking about the others who they'll hurt. It also touches on the point that people will adjust to 'betterment' until they believe their 'heaven' isn't good enough for them anymore. |
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17 years ago
by Vanessa
The word choice was strong, and the emtion was deep and clear. You did an excellent job. I wouldn't have understood it either if you hadn't written the meaning at the top, but excellent write 5/5
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17 years ago
by Kaila
I liked this I got it I think...but the explanation on top did help a little bit I think you did a good job
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17 years ago
by just love me
Everyone puts words from songs on this site. I just liked the way the lyrics sounded so I put it on here. If you check anyone's quotes on here, you will see lyrics from songs..I will put (Taking Back Sunday) in parenthesis after the quote but that's all you're getting out of me.
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17 years ago
by Bridgette
I really like this poem and I think that the concept within the poem is very sad, yet true. I think that you ended it very nicely... It really got your point across. The flow and rhythm of this was very good and I just absolutely loved this poem! Great job! 5/5
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17 years ago
by Jenni Marie
My favourite part was the last part, that really got to me.
I thought this was a beautiful penned poem, really touching.
As always, I loved all of it.
